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Echoes of Freedom

A Tale of Two Birds

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Echoes of Freedom
Photo by David Clode on Unsplash

A free bird leaps

on the back of the breeze

and drifts downstream

till the currents cease.

He dips his wings

in the orange-gold light

and claims the sky

as his birthright.

But a bird confined

in a narrow cage

sees little beyond

the bars of rage.

His wings are clipped,

his feet are bound,

so he lifts his voice

in a mournful sound.

The caged bird sings

with a trembling trill

of unknown things

longed for still,

and his song is heard

on distant hills,

for the caged bird

sings of freedom.

The free bird dreams

of another breeze,

the trade winds soft

through sighing trees,

of fat worms waiting

on a dawn-lit lawn,

and he names the sky

his own.

But the caged bird stands

on the grave of dreams,

his shadow screams

a nightmare's theme.

His wings are clipped,

his feet are tied,

so he lifts his voice

to the sky.

The caged bird sings

with a trembling trill

of unknown things

longed for still,

and his song is heard

on distant hills,

for the caged bird

sings of freedom.

inspirational

About the Creator

Jason “Jay” Benskin

Crafting authored passion in fiction, horror fiction, and poems.

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  • Amy littleabout a year ago

    Nice read!

  • Kennedy Smith2 years ago

    Fascinating piece

  • Shelby 2 years ago

    Beautiful

  • Milrose samboque2 years ago

    Wonderful! Thanks for sharing

  • John Baxter2 years ago

    Nice read! Looking forward for more

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