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Echoes of a Fading Heart

A Lament of Lost Love

By Rony SutradarPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Echoes of a Fading Heart
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Echoes of a Fading Heart

In the quiet sunset, your murmur waits,

A dash of warmth currently falling through fingers.

Love's delicate melody went to a forlorn murmur,

As stars above faint in the midnight sky.

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Recollections like shadows, they delicately sob,

An affection once brilliant now floats into rest.

In the calm, my heart calls out to you,

In any case, in the reverberation, I know it's not something similar.

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Rony Sutradar

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  • Dawnxisoul393art2 years ago

    The imagery of a quiet sunset and warmth slipping through fingers evokes a sense of loss and longing. The recollections described as delicate sobs and the realization that the reverberation is not the same add depth to the emotions portrayed. Wonderful and have a nice day!

  • A beautifully written poem. Well done

  • I understand you as a love poetry writer. Well done brother!

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