Echo Between Stars
in the pause before remembrance
My time draws near
for another adventure—
not a goodbye,
but a passage.
The sun bows low
to the edge of the world,
its final gift of gold
before darkness swallows the sky.
There are paths I’ve yet to walk,
stones I’ve not touched,
ruins waiting, holding stories
that remember
even when I am forgotten.
Perhaps I’ll leave this life
as you hold me—
watching the Mediterranean
bleed into twilight,
my breath fading with the tide.
But I wonder…
What will remain of me?
Have I carved anything
into the vault of memory?
Because I remember you—
the one who gave me breath
when mine ran low,
the one who gave me light
when the stars dimmed.
There is still time to echo,
to write in flame,
to leave
my mark upon the cosmos.
About the Creator
Rebecca A Hyde Gonzales
I love to write. I have a deep love for words and language; a budding philologist (a late bloomer according to my father). I have been fascinated with the construction of sentences and how meaning is derived from the order of words.


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