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Echo Between Stars

in the pause before remembrance

By Rebecca A Hyde GonzalesPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
Echo Between Stars
Photo by Casey Horner on Unsplash

My time draws near

for another adventure—

not a goodbye,

but a passage.

The sun bows low

to the edge of the world,

its final gift of gold

before darkness swallows the sky.

There are paths I’ve yet to walk,

stones I’ve not touched,

ruins waiting, holding stories

that remember

even when I am forgotten.

Perhaps I’ll leave this life

as you hold me—

watching the Mediterranean

bleed into twilight,

my breath fading with the tide.

But I wonder…

What will remain of me?

Have I carved anything

into the vault of memory?

Because I remember you—

the one who gave me breath

when mine ran low,

the one who gave me light

when the stars dimmed.

There is still time to echo,

to write in flame,

to leave

my mark upon the cosmos.

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About the Creator

Rebecca A Hyde Gonzales

I love to write. I have a deep love for words and language; a budding philologist (a late bloomer according to my father). I have been fascinated with the construction of sentences and how meaning is derived from the order of words.

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