"Can you see it?" she asked, her voice like wine,
"The way my heart sketches yours in lines."
His gaze traced the strokes, gentle and slow,
"I see the art only your soul could show."
"And if I told you," she murmured low,
"That every curve is drawn with fire?"
He smiled, a warmth she'd come to know,
"Then every breath is my desire."
They lingered close, both bound, entwined,
"Your passion’s ink, my heart’s the page."
With every touch, their worlds aligned—
A love sketched deep, beyond the age.
Author's Note:
This poem captures that feeling when love becomes art—where each touch, each glance feels like part of something you’re creating together. It’s about the rare, unspoken magic of two people seeing and sketching each other’s souls. For anyone who's felt that spark, this one's for you!
Thank you for reading my read :)
About the Creator
Komal
I write poems and stories that hit the feels.
When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.
𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋
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Comments (9)
This is full of romance and passion. I felt this one and the flirty vibes flowing free! 🔥
Wow. You're poem's remind me of Rupi's great one! That image is perfect too...
This is a very beautiful poem ❤️
Wow! That was such an amazing poem! So deep and thought-provoking. Great job! 💥💫👏
This was so wonderful! Loved your poem!
Beautiful, Komal
parvo komal your words from your heart
Wow! You've never disappointed me! Komal Such a heartfelt and lovely convo :)
I did! Spark? Goosebumps! Every line... I felt lost in your words. Seriously, Komal, this is my favorite one. The emotions and the erectness of art along with their feelings are captivating! Komal, I feel like you're a great writer. I feel inspired. Thank you for sharing such a masterpiece ❤