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Drunk Tank

(Deadbeat Poetry)

By Dakota PedersonPublished 5 years ago 1 min read
Drunk Tank
Photo by Tim Hüfner on Unsplash

Grey blue oxidized steel crumpled against an electrical pole. A nice soft memory. Cold steel and concrete floors. Measurements of a drunk tank. One blanket for each of the five men.Wasting. The pounding could not stop. The eyes remain. Fixed. Hopeless. 16 hours. Pine Sol. Disappointment. Bend over. Look up. Spread em. Show us your left arm then right. All of your tattoos. What do they mean?

The indistinguishable places

between yourself

and the world

Your soul becomes pavement

hardened by the world

The eyes of men look

Down when you pass

Your reflection is only

In other people’s

glares

The world is now your enemy

And you have no where to go

The ringing doesn’t stop

And the world breeds

Contempt for your kind

sad poetry

About the Creator

Dakota Pederson

I started when I felt I could not reach any lower but searched for truth. Instead I found poetry in a thrift store on Sprague Avenue. Poetry is my truth.

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