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El Raval

(Deadbeat Poetry)

By Dakota PedersonPublished 5 years ago 1 min read
El Raval
Photo by Collins Lesulie on Unsplash

Christmas vomit remains in a bucket as a stray dog wanders by. I follow him. His fur is matted by the days and nights wandering the streets of El Raval. I carry the bucket to a fountain to wash it. The vomit mixes in the fountains water. I walk back through the streets in the morning light the dog no longer remains with me. Only the homeless and muslims linger outside their shops. The brain of the streets narrow and bend; cavernous and silent on this Christmas morning. The Christmas stupor has set in.

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Dakota Pederson

I started when I felt I could not reach any lower but searched for truth. Instead I found poetry in a thrift store on Sprague Avenue. Poetry is my truth.

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