Drizzling heart
Solo sole seldom survives
They never knew my name
Until the drizzling hearts spoke up
Solo sole seldom survives
May nights own lights
Not until they lose their identity
Pollen grains drift away
Cold breeze softens bee sound
Sunshine surrenders sacrifice
Runtime runs right
Solo sole seldom survives
So is my life
Candle light doesn't help
Yet survives hope in shivers
Smiles drown in river
Return yourself
Reattach myself
Bring the cold back to the nameless
Love's tears are faceless
emotion useless
Memories prolong
Time dilates listening to your words
Still alive?
Solo sole seldom survives.
They never knew my name
Until the drizzling hearts spoke up
Is it cold in Saturn?
Alone are you cold?
Until the drizzling hearts spoke up, Is it too old?
Mild melody melts memories
Solo sole seldom survives.
About the Creator
Karun
🌿✨ Karun, a poet weaving emotions into verses, embarked on the journey of words to unearth the beauty of feelings. In the delicate dance of ink and emotion, my poetry delves into the nexus of the human heart and the natural world.✍️
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Compelling and original writing
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"Any last words, cowboy?" "None you'd understand, sodbuster." "Funny. That's Marshall Sodbuster to you. But I meant some last nugget that would help us in the adjudication of the myriad offenses counted against you and your gang. I wasn't asking for penitence."
By Adam Diehl5 days ago in Fiction
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Wonderful✨😍
I loved seeing able to almost see and feel from your descriptions here alone—amazing work!
Congratulations on Top Story!
Wow The endings Feels good Mild melody melts memories Solo sole seldom survives.
Congrats on your Top Story!
Congrats on top story!!
Fabulous & congratulations on Top Story!!!💕❤️❤️
This was eerie yet beautifully done
Congrats on the Top Story! I loved the somber, cold feel to this poem. You really captured an amazing mood!
I'm a believer in that refrain.
Congratulations on Top Story. 🥳 I love how your words create a cold, aching distance that mirrors the cold, aching distance of space, physically and emotionally created. Especially love "Solo sole seldom survives."
Oh! Back to say congrats on your top story.
Thanks for sharing with us.