Drinking Fountain in the Clouds
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The yeast on the eastern side of your heart rises and smells as bread.
Your smell rakes the leaves into neat piles of mystification in my mind that is falling.
You brake the silence of caverns deep,
you ripple the water with vibrations of joys to reap.
Blending sounds and careful coos roost in nests of consciousness and contentment.
I see your pale blue dress swirl in the wind of harmony.
Stretching, starry skies reach down before night fall has commenced.
Your caramel skin beams me into the portrait of the present.
Delightful decadence drops from the drinking fountain in the clouds that sprung a small leak.
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Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Prayer of Hope
Lord, you are most excellent and Holy. Your heart for people to be saved is consistent. Every person is a master work of art because you formed them. I’m amazed by your choice of diversity. Your mercy and grace are matchless. The people around me on the day to day, help them to long for the truth. You are the truth. There is nothing you don’t see. World hunger breaks your heart more than it could ever break our hearts. You see the spiritual condition of every human. Everything is laid bare before your perfect vision. People try to hide their sin, but God sees the good, the bad and the lukewarm actions that are made.
By Rowan Finley 8 months ago in Poets
Comments (9)
Very beautiful blending of imagery.
This is beautifully descriptive. I really like the image of a drinking fountain in the sky. Well done and congrats on the TS.
you have created a magical world we all want to visit
wow
Nice 🙂
"Stretching, starry skies reach down before night fall has commenced." Love the imagery... this is very nice! 😊
Makes me thing of manna from heaven raining down on us
Wow, you’ve wrapped the senses into something kinda magical and adorable!
Beautiful poem, love the imagery you created with your words.