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Don't wait to DevourπŸ˜‹

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By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 3 years ago β€’ 1 min read
Don't wait to DevourπŸ˜‹
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The Moment I Knew,

Trying to hold onto you

caused sticky fingers...

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How long does it take for you to devour Ice Cream on a Cone? Usually, I like to Lick the Ice Cream 🍨 for a period and Savor the flavor πŸ˜‹ But You Can't Take too long...

Ice Cream on a Cone you must Eat Quickly or else may cause Sticky Fingers!

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

β€œ Public Diary, of an Urban Poet

πŸŽ‰I am an Actor, Model, Writer, and Entrepreneur β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ™

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  • Hannah Moore3 years ago

    So much scope for interpretation, brilliant.

  • Donna Renee3 years ago

    Oooh this is like layered scoops of ice cream meaning! ❀️🀣❀️

  • Gal Mux3 years ago

    Wink wink πŸ˜„πŸ˜‰

  • Loryne Andawey3 years ago

    I love both the surface read and the deeper dive. - rereads the poem while eating icecream from a bowl - πŸ‘

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    Oh! Clever and lovely!

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