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Dear sky please don't cry
I hate it when you turn grey
Don’t match my dark days
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Hey, I'm Emily! Thanks for reading. Hope you read something that inspires you. Or something that you find relatable.
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions

Comments (5)
I've got so much I need to catch up on with your poems, I love your writing style, I shared this piece here: https://shopping-feedback.today/resources/raise-your-voice-thread-10-31-2024%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E 💕
This might just be one of the best haikus I have ever read! What an incredible piece!
This is one of the best haiku(s) I've seen! I could completely relate to it!
Glad you wrote it, Emily.
This one touched my heart. I love it so much, you took a memorable unique perspective, and turned it into a masterpiece.