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Don’t Rain

And Causes More Pain

By L.I.EPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Don’t Rain
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Dear sky please don't cry

I hate it when you turn grey

Don’t match my dark days

nature poetrysad poetry

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L.I.E

Hey, I'm Emily! Thanks for reading. Hope you read something that inspires you. Or something that you find relatable.

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Caitlin Charltonabout a year ago

    I've got so much I need to catch up on with your poems, I love your writing style, I shared this piece here: https://shopping-feedback.today/resources/raise-your-voice-thread-10-31-2024%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E 💕

  • Anu's Quillabout a year ago

    This might just be one of the best haikus I have ever read! What an incredible piece!

  • ᔕᗩᗰ ᕼᗩᖇTYabout a year ago

    This is one of the best haiku(s) I've seen! I could completely relate to it!

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    Glad you wrote it, Emily.

  • Caitlin Charltonabout a year ago

    This one touched my heart. I love it so much, you took a memorable unique perspective, and turned it into a masterpiece.

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