
i don’t know what to do, to do or say
you get so damn close and then you pull away
i see a different you, everyday
i just can’t carry on, carry on this way
i don’t know what to say, to say or do
you’re leaving me lost, without a clue
it’s ripping me apart inside loving you
those moments of closeness, so precious too few
i don’t know what to do or say
i’m trapped inside this game you play
i don’t know why or what is real
i don’t know what to think or feel
i don’t know what to say or do
i only know it’s cause of you
i don’t know when or why or how
i only know there’s nothing now
u pleez me
u sqeez me
u teez me
u freez me
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
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