
Droopy eyes met mine,
Overcome with emotion,
Longing for devotion,
Unsure if this love was real or fiction,
Night had fallen as the full moon was in motion,
And two hearts showcased raw emotion,
Yearning for love that beats expectation.
Dreaming of untapped feelings were inevitable,
But something about this was so relatable,
His kiss memorable,
His honesty honorable,
And this relationship fixable.
The full moons light,
Shined ever so bright,
Stay asleep I just might,
For this dream makes it a great night.
Rules of love were strained,
To this love I’m chained,
Our bodies inflamed,
For each heart is reclaimed.
About the Creator
Simone Marie
Always loved reading and writing. This is my push to show everyone the many stories I have brewing in me! Here’s to storytelling!
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Excellence. Keep it up. Go you!!