
Do you mind
if I count the leaves on the trees
If I count the stems on each branch
if I count the seeds on a strawberry
if I count the stars in the sky
my eyes tend to be blurry
I tend to be in no hurry
this is my way of being a nice guy
it’s a beautiful way
just waiting to die
hi
do you mind
if I write a letter
just to get better
if I write a poem
since I’m feeling a little lonesome
if I write an elegy
it’s truly not my specialty
but I’ll try to write each word
a little bit more carefully
hi
do you mind
if I’m not kind
if I change it from day to night
if I use my left hand instead of right
if I see black instead of white
would it be a delight
despite the fact of no insight
treat the fact
concludes my given time
About the Creator
Kaiden
writing some poems. Enjoy your time reading.
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I love the cadence of this. Every verse just rolls off the tongue (off the mind?) so nicely.