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Do you know how I feel deep down this hill?

Do you know?

By Ina ZeneliPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
Do you know how I feel deep down this hill?
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Do you know how I feel deep down this hill?

Do you know?

Empty on the inside, but gold on the outside.

Rough as a stone and gloomy as the dark.

Angry as a bull, as depressed as a koala.

I sleep but do not rest.

What is this? Can you tell me?

A bad storm or crazy weather,

Punching me more and more.

Bright for a moment, then some light,

Then dark—pitch night.

What is this? Can you tell me?

There I am, one more time, up the hill.

The more I know, the more, I fear.

Feeling small in the cold breeze.

There I am, alone, losing my way home…

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Ina Zeneli

In love with writing books for kids, young adults, poetry, and novels.

Find my books here:

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https://www.amazon.com/author/inazeneli

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  • Mother Combs10 months ago

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  • L.I.E10 months ago

    Aww I like how you portrayed your up-and-down feelings in this poem. Amazing writing.

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