Do you know how I feel deep down this hill?
Do you know?
Do you know how I feel deep down this hill?
Do you know?
Empty on the inside, but gold on the outside.
Rough as a stone and gloomy as the dark.
Angry as a bull, as depressed as a koala.
I sleep but do not rest.
What is this? Can you tell me?
A bad storm or crazy weather,
Punching me more and more.
Bright for a moment, then some light,
Then dark—pitch night.
What is this? Can you tell me?
There I am, one more time, up the hill.
The more I know, the more, I fear.
Feeling small in the cold breeze.
There I am, alone, losing my way home…
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Ina Zeneli
In love with writing books for kids, young adults, poetry, and novels.
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Aww I like how you portrayed your up-and-down feelings in this poem. Amazing writing.