Do I Need to Say Any More?
Short and Sweet Challenge Entry!

I love you
Do I need to say any more?
Your loud gas fizz
Your bold red hue
I love you
Your rich iron nose
Your deep rust tang
I love you
Do I need to say any more?
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Thanks for reading!
This is another entry into the Short and Sweet Challenge.
In case you didn't know, it is inspired by:
Many Scot's first love, or at least one of them!
Here is another entry:
You can also take a look at the rest of my work here.
About the Creator
Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection out now!
Streams and Scratches in My Mind coming soon!
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Comments (7)
Really fun poem! Very curious about what this drink is!
Bit puzzled but left some love ♥️♥️💕
Like Naomi, I've not heard of this drink before but I would love to try it. For now, my liquid love is coffee and water!
Never heard of this drink, but I like that you’re going unconventional with the love poems, not writing about humans lol.
When you find something you like, celebrate it!
I'm sorry, but "Your loud gas fizz" still has me laughing. This is great, Paul!
Short and actually sweet! Haha, I had fun reading this one, Paul!