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Djinn's Lamp

What I Would Wish

By Mother CombsPublished 12 months ago 1 min read

Last night I dreamed that I found a magical Genie lamp

Excitedly, I rubbed and polished it until it was like new

Exhilarated, I nervously held it in my hands til I felt a cramp

I was hoping for maybe a hint of grey, purple, or blue

Just as I was starting to give up and set the lamp down where I found it

I felt a shiver begin inside the lamp, then it began to shimmer

I stepped back from the lamp, surprised, and a little startled, I’ll admit

Opalescent smoke began emitting forth from it in a glimmer

A woman of ethereal beauty started to form in the luminous pearl-like vapor

The Genie stood before me, in all her majestic glorious splendor

As I watched, she came forward and offered me three wishes, all in good humor

I could have asked for riches, fame, health, or even to become more slender.

The thought crossed my mind to end world hunger and bring about peace

Consideration was given to owning a Lamborghini, but it was quickly buried.

I will say I never once even thought about asking for a cheesy sweater fleece

But when I thought about what I wanted the most in the world

I could only look at the beautiful Djinn and in all surety, say to her

There is only one thing in my life that I desire more than anything

And that’s to have one more day with you, no other wish do I prefer

Waking up before my wish could be granted, my memories of you cling

As the static charge is attracted to wool, thoughts of you pervading my soul

Come to me in my moments of grief, raising my spirits higher

Reminders of what was once ours, being together our only goal

There’ll never be another, because you are my only desire

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Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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  • Call Me Les11 months ago

    I felt the pain come through. Beautiful poem.

  • Babs Iverson11 months ago

    Emotional love and heartbreak!!! Well done!!!

  • Denise Larkin11 months ago

    Wonderful to read and beautifully crafted.

  • Denise E Lindquist11 months ago

    Wow! Fun to Powerful in one minute!

  • Oh wow that went from cheeky to real in a heartbeat. The last half packed a whopper of a punch. Well done

  • C. Rommial Butler12 months ago

    Well-wrought! If I found a lamp, I would hope Robin Williams hopped out. I'd use my third wish to keep him around around to make the world a happier place.

  • Komal12 months ago

    What a magical, heartfelt dream! The mix of whimsy with deep emotion really brings this Genie to life. I love how it’s not just about wishing for material things, but for something more meaningful. It’s like a beautiful reminder of what truly matters!

  • I'm so sorry for being slow but did the genie grant that wish? Loved your poem!

  • Test12 months ago

    Amazing 💖

  • Andrea Corwin 12 months ago

    Beautiful 😍 so well expressed.

  • Tales by J.J.12 months ago

    The emotions you express are profound and relatable, bringing to life the essence of love and loss.

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