Distracted by Juliet...
I paralyzed my satisfaction to keep hold of My Fanciers' Needle.
I feel like I'm watching
The view of the Breaking of daylight.
The sun ascends when I see her and Sadly takes off when she leaves...
I suffer throughout the vampire hours of the twilight.
My Obsession was to get over it, but how when She is always in my mentality?
She haunts me in my dream,
So beautifully.
Juliet,
My Love,
I
Can't
Resist,
That
Your,
The Only One For Me...
I learned, that there existed a good time and the other one's...
We'll let's just hope for the Best❗
I'm Assembling a blunder that I refuse to let get the best of my ability to make the Achievements that will control my destiny.
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Comments (10)
Great work, this feels more haunting than some of the others. Loving the development Lonzo!! ☺️✨👍
The vampire hours of twilight! Lovely. I might just steal your phrase sometime. Ah Juliet, Juliet. Wherefore art thou Juliet.
Beautiful!
I love the way you use capitalization to emphasize specific words. Additionally, I loved the vampire hours/twilight line. Well done!
Beautiful!!
Another wonderful piece. Loving this series.
I like how you use images of the sun, the twilight and the vampire hours to convey the contrast between your joy and your sorrow.
Oooo, this was excellent!
Well done sir! 🎉🎨
Nice work!