https://animalia-life.club/qa/pictures/venus-in-the-night-sky
Why so aloof, love?
You shine on the horizon
Far from my small life
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D. J. Reddall
I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.
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Comments (10)
Wonderful, D.J.
We are quite small aren’t we? Great haiku, D.J.!
This is beautiful. Well done.
There is a wooing element to this, D.J.. It reminds me of Romeo and Juliet.
Oh wow, this was such a creative take on the challenge! I loved it!
Fabulous!!
This so well captures the feeling I associate with the sight of Venus' brilliance.
Its only small if you don’t reach for the stars/planets. Good job!
Very original. - Good Job. -- I am subscribing to you.
Bright things might seem aloof from afar, it could be mirroring your shine :)