Spinning mind
With a memory of blue
Recalling the challenges of the day and again
Digging in those places where gratitude is hidden
The next place is deeper in the wilderness
Walking over rabbits being digested in tubes
I see it
I stop and poke the ground
Here’s the spot
To find what I’m looking for - I think
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Archery Owl
Father and Friend
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I appreciate the visual aspect of this with the rabbits. 🐰
Ohh this one is layered! You’re making gratitude feel like a treasure hunt and I’m here for it.✨