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Die

Calm

By Rick Henry Christopher Published 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - July 2023
Die
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The rose is red

The sky has bled

I walk with you

Look at the hue

I was content

You are silent

I'm over here

You're nowhere near

My heart is crying

Because you're dying

Why is life

So unfair

So much pain

I cannot bare

I know that one day

I will die

But for today

I will try

I will live

A life complete

For you I will

Avoid defeat

But for now

I have one goal

That is to

Calm down my soul

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Rick Henry Christopher

Writing fulfills my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and soothing the bruises of the day.

I’m an open book. I’m not afraid to show my face or speak my mind

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  • Oneg In The Arctic2 years ago

    Quite powerful and intense. One of the deeper poems of yours I’ve read

  • JBaz3 years ago

    Well deserved Top Story. You said so much with your words, they made an impact on me.

  • M.O. Hidalgo3 years ago

    Great stuff

  • The struggle to resist giving into despair when the greater cause of our hope is no longer with us, powerfully expressed.

  • Holly Pheni3 years ago

    Awww, I felt this one. It is so difficult yet such a precious trust to walk a loved one home at the end.

  • Missclicked3 years ago

    great work

  • Very well done my friend

  • J. S. Wade3 years ago

    So moving. Rick. You emote authentic and Succinct exasperation, frustration, pain of your journey. I hope you attain your goal. 🥰 Congratulations on top story. 🥇

  • Dana Stewart3 years ago

    Sophistication in its simplicity - congrats on Top Story Rick!

  • The Dani Writer3 years ago

    A beautiful heart-rending reflection, Rick! 😥💗💐

  • Congratulations on your Top Story✨💖🎉😉

  • Lamar Wiggins3 years ago

    🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽Prayers for you, my friend. 💖

  • Very moving poem

  • Andrei Z.3 years ago

    Nicely done, Rick! Some deep thoughts here!

  • Rick, congratulations on your Top Story! ✴️ It is great to see you here! 💜

  • Congratulations on your top story Rick. These feelings reach us all. What comfort comes in that unity

  • Paul Stewart3 years ago

    Congrats on this getting Top Story; thoroughly well-deserved!

  • SUPRIYO BOR3 years ago

    Wonderful !! Great work

  • Test3 years ago

    Beautifully timed. I’m heavy hearted. Feels weird to say congratulations. I’m glad this made top story 🤍

  • Gerald Holmes3 years ago

    Congrats on the Top Story, Rick.

  • C. H. Richard3 years ago

    Sending many healing thoughts your way. Very powerful poem that speaks volumes about trying to be there for a loved one who is passing. SMany hearts ♥️

  • Very simple but says so much ❤️Congratulations on top story!!

  • Donna Renee3 years ago

    Sending you peaceful thoughts, Rick! ❤️

  • Gerald Holmes3 years ago

    Well said, Rick. Powerful words that speak volumes.

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