So many patterns in this world,
I too am a pattern,
How many arts on this planet,
I too am an art,
Focus keeps me fastened,
Triumph fills me with enthusiasm,
Soul searching makes me intelligent,
Pain always soothes me,
No any secrets,
Just hard work matters,
Do not rely only on talents,
Summon up my mind do shout,
"You've got this!"
Keep remembering my dream,
It fills me with steps,
Till the ultimate,
Die thinking, what's my dream,
Suffer from the dream,
Then victory follows me,
I always keep polishing my talents,
It blows the weaknesses far,
I am the best,
That's it.
About the Creator
Esala Gunathilake
I am an enthusiastic writer who feel the sense of humanity. Thus, I can write stanzas, short stories, novels, articles and blogs as well. I am a blog contributor for the Ananda College Engineer's Ink student chapter website.
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Comments (23)
Your poem is deep! You have an insight into the human expression and experience 🌹🌹
Nice
nice
This is pretty inspiring! Nicely done
What a beautifully crafted and inspiring piece!
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Your poetry has great depth, Esala. Well done! This line really made me think: "Pain always soothes me" . . . it is so true. Perhaps it is the endorphins, but perhaps it is by means of contrast.
'Focus keeps me fastened' this line hit hard. Truly a great talent in writing you have my friend.
full of emotion, thanks for sharing.
Well-wrought! I spent a night sleeping but fully aware I was dreaming before I awoke and read this, which made it all the more relevant!
Focus keeps you fastened! Great poem, Esala!!
Nice ending with an affirmation in poetry
Very emotional painting!
conveys a strong sense of confidence and resilience ...
Nice work
Your drive and dedication will always push you to be the best! Lovely poem!
Yes you are the best, very nice!
I really liked your text, a light and realistic poem.
Wow...
Nice work.
Very impowering read
Insightful, keep it up!!!
Whoaaa, this was extremely powerful! Loved your poem!