Desperate to Find a New Tomorrow
Things in this world need to change

Desperate to Find a New Tomorrow
The air is thick, the night is still,
Dreams collapse against my will.
The weight of shadows drags me low,
Yet I ache for a path I do not know.
Hope whispers faintly, a fragile thread,
Amid the ruins of words unsaid.
The stars seem distant, their light subdued,
Reflecting my soul in solitude.
I reach for dawn, though clouds conspire,
To snuff the spark of my heart’s desire.
But embered within, a flicker remains,
A stubborn pulse in my weary veins.
Oh, tomorrow, so far, so near,
Your promise dances beyond my fear.
Lead me to fields where sunlight streams,
And I can rebuild the shattered dreams.
Though I am desperate, I will not yield,
For even the broken can find a shield.
With every breath, I’ll chase and fight,
To claim a tomorrow bathed in light.
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions




Comments (4)
Well composed
Tomorrow will always come it is what we do at the time that matters. Good job.
Beautiful
I hear you on this one.