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Desperate to Find a New Tomorrow

Things in this world need to change

By Marie381Uk Published about a year ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Desperate to Find a New Tomorrow

The air is thick, the night is still,

Dreams collapse against my will.

The weight of shadows drags me low,

Yet I ache for a path I do not know.

Hope whispers faintly, a fragile thread,

Amid the ruins of words unsaid.

The stars seem distant, their light subdued,

Reflecting my soul in solitude.

I reach for dawn, though clouds conspire,

To snuff the spark of my heart’s desire.

But embered within, a flicker remains,

A stubborn pulse in my weary veins.

Oh, tomorrow, so far, so near,

Your promise dances beyond my fear.

Lead me to fields where sunlight streams,

And I can rebuild the shattered dreams.

Though I am desperate, I will not yield,

For even the broken can find a shield.

With every breath, I’ll chase and fight,

To claim a tomorrow bathed in light.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  1. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Horace Wasabout a year ago

    Well composed

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Tomorrow will always come it is what we do at the time that matters. Good job.

  • Daphsamabout a year ago

    Beautiful

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    I hear you on this one.

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