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a comet’s song

By Irene Margarita Irizarry CruzPublished 6 years ago 1 min read

my mirror only shows a carrier of me: there’s a part of (i) still missing

4am awakened

my eyes fixate on the distance between our bodies

i blinked when i shouldn’t have

i can’t feel me there with you; we are a year now.

i whisper a certainty: i am not alone in the universe

composing astrological pieces

we became comets

to float freely in this space we share

absent of superficiality voids

pulling our gravitational feelings closer

with just a kiss

stretching time alongside

our starry moment.

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Irene Margarita Irizarry Cruz

in constant self-discovery. i scribble my thoughts into poetry and journaling as a journey into finding myself. i tend to fall in love with nostalgia as well as laughter, joy and stillness.

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