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Departure

The Silent Passage Between Life and What Comes After

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Departure
Photo by Palak Pitroda on Unsplash

A breath held quiet, the air turns thin,

The night bows low, where shadows begin.

A clock slows down, its ticking fades,

The now dissolves, as silence invades.

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A final glimpse at stars untied,

No questions left, no need to hide.

The world goes on, no whispers shared,

An empty space, yet no one cared.

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Yet in that quiet, where stillness reigns,

A spirit shifts, released from chains.

For death’s not loss, but passage through,

A doorway crossed, to something new.

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So grieve not long, nor fear the shift,

The heart finds peace in the silent drift.

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Jason “Jay” Benskin

Crafting authored passion in fiction, horror fiction, and poems.

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  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    This was atmospheric and ethereal almost.

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    Nice!❤️

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Departing is such sad news, but you described it so well. Good work.

  • Silver Dauxabout a year ago

    I loved this one. The rhyme scheme made it soft. Beautiful!

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