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Denial?

Breakup Nonet Challenge Entry No. 1

By Kendall Defoe Published 2 years ago 1 min read
Denial?
Photo by Elisei Abiculesei on Unsplash

Me? A broken heart? Please, I'm a man!

I ain't got no feelings to hurt!

I don't miss her at all. No...

Not her hair...or those eyes...

Those long walks when she

Held hands with me...

No, I (sniff)...

Kleenex?

Thanks...

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  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Oh, man, now I got something in my eye 😢

  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a year ago

    Well-wrought! I'm again and again stricken with how the nonet is such an excellent form for this particular subject matter. The dwindling lines are alike the collapse of reason in the face of heartbreak, and you did an excellent job here capturing the recourse to bravado as a response!

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    This is great!! And so much truth! 🥰

  • D.K. Shepard2 years ago

    Loved this! Good bit of humor! First one that made me smile

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Oh, I like this. Especially the end where it become clear he's actually talking to someone. Well done.

  • Men are humans with emotions as well. Loved your poem!

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    Nice!!! I liked the POV. Stubborn, yet it's clear it's going to take more time to accept for him.

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    Great entry, clever!

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