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Born with time on side
dematerialisation
of time, ends in death
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Thank you for reading. Another entry into the Time Capsule Haiku Challenge.
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Paul Stewart
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Comments (10)
I like how each line transitions into the next. Very thoughtfully written. Good work.
So true....!
I love the clock pic. Great read.
Nice job. Woooo
"dematerialisation" ...damn, I love that! This poem is achingly true - like life, like a story, it has a beginning and and end...a haiku that tells a tale; well done!
Great use of words.
Very deep. The second line give the poem depths. 💝
I'm liking the middle word!! Creative use of the term. Great work!!
Nicely done.
we all share that time buddy, I like this, great job 😊