i can let my mind race
ever so quickly
passing fragments of things
i will never ever show
many miniscule manifestations
of minor mayhem
and a great to many things
i still need to know
so many things i need to take
a really long hard look at
and all require much more
than a cursory glance
each one beckons the many
minute facets of my attention
and perhaps a bit more
than a mere passing chance
so i dart around
in the dusty corners of my mind
unearthing a great many things
i thought hidden forever
looking for that something
that i hope i never find
as i count the finite seconds
between now and never
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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Comments (5)
Oh, it's a perfect ode to what's happening in my head every other day. These thoughts are just too thick. A good solvent indeed would help here. Maybe, acetone?
Gosh this was so deep and beautiful!
Great piece. You craft the flow so well, so consistent.
Love your work Brenton!
This is a great little thought-provoking piece!