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Deception

Ode to a break up

By Joe PattersonPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Deception
Photo by Andreas Haslinger on Unsplash

You are not what you appeared to be.

Lies are how you appear to me.

All that you did was use me.

Gaslight and accuse me.

I’ve seen who you are.

We won’t go far.

No more “we”

It’s just

Me.

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About the Creator

Joe Patterson

Hi I'm Joe Patterson. I am a writer at heart who is a big geek for film, music, and literature, which have all inspired me to be a writer. I rap, write stories both short and long, and I'm also aspiring to be an author and a filmmaker.

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  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Love your nonet and the rhyme scheme.

  • Dylan about a year ago

    Wonderfully crafted! Such an amazing nonet.

  • Jaye Pool2 years ago

    Very real and relatable - thank you so much for sharing!

  • Well done!❤️

  • I related to your poem! SO TRUE!

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