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Dear Fate

Sincerely, The Dreamer

By BPublished 3 years ago β€’ 1 min read
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Dear Fate,

I have to know,

to what do I await?

What is there in store for me

what did you predate?

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I don't mean my departing,

or where I go from here

I'm asking what happens next?

The future seems unclear

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Is this all that's to expect

the world offers little

I feel hopeless and unfulfilled

like I'm stuck inside a riddle

*

When does the magic come

the stars align, and quests begin?

When do I get the chance to fly?

How does my story spin?

*

I thought there'd be a hero here

a noble knight, a villain there.

I thought there'd be skies that sing

like the heavens were in prayer

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This can't be all that I endure

I want to see a world that's pure

where the moon will laugh, wink, and play

and the sun has powers that can cure

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Tell me, Fate, where do I find

this world I've seen in my mind?

How do I leave this one behind

to reach the one divined?

*

Don't tell me that I dreamt it up

that all I'll see has been corrupt

I can't stay here when every day

my hope has been destruct

*

Fate, please, I beg of you

free me of life so meager

I'll patiently wait for your reply

Sincerely, the Dreamer

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About the Creator

B

I have a few stories and poems inside me that I want to share. Maybe, if I'm lucky, they'll reach people who'll enjoy them. πŸ“–

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  • Roy Stevens3 years ago

    Very good!

  • Excellent ❀️

  • Dylan 3 years ago

    I love this ❀️ It's beautiful and amazing!

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    Aww, this was such a beautiful plea. I loved the signature. Well done :)

  • Dana Stewart3 years ago

    Beautiful, Brin. Just lovely.

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