Daybreak Remedy
the ephemeral veil between night and day

I rise from bed in a stupor,
Still overcome by last night’s slumber.
At first, I worry
If I had already missed it.
I head to the kitchen
To find a kettle,
Dried leaves from the cupboard,
Some water,
And let it bubble on the stove.
Steam rises with the cool aroma
Of peppermint,
Another moment to let it steep.
I take the glass to sit by the window
Facing east,
And I wait --
To find a semblance of joy,
A remembrance of symmetry
In a life sometimes overwhelming,
At the only hour when I feel
Like my existence is in harmony
With the world before it awakens,
And the people begin to hasten.
But at this moment
When all is quiet,
And my mind is still,
Conferring me
To only be.
At the edge of the darkness
Among the horizon,
A paintbrush dipped in bright pastels
Colors the calm and sweeps away
The last remnants of night,
Painting it in a brilliant indigo
Upon the easel of halcyon light.
A canopy of silence that cocoons the air
Holds me together like an old friend.
As gilded beams illume the room,
The sun colors the land
And beckons the stillness
To stir again.
I breathe deeply.
It quells my mind
For just a second longer,
And I sip from my tea.
At least there was a moment
When time belonged
To only me.
About the Creator
S.R. Var
I wrote to understand the world around me. I stopped to become a scientist. Decades later, I write to understand myself. Perhaps if you see a bit of yourself in my writing, it may bring you some solace too.
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Comments (8)
Omg, this was so relatable! This solitude brings me so much bliss. It made me so happy to see what I feel in your poem. You did a fantastic job. I loved it!
This is as good as any poetry I've ever read. Reminds me at once of the most solemn work of both Kahlil Gibran and Charles Bukowski (yes, there was solemn self-reflection in Bukowski, haha). Well done!
Loving it! Subscribed, hearted, did insight too!💖😊💕
Really beautiful. I love those moments of early-morning solitude too. 💛
Thank you for sharing an early morning "sigh". Very nice, I definitely related
Yes - it's beautiful! A beautiful moment and nicely shared!
This is so beautiful!
Beautiful words, I loved it.