Photo: Pixabay
Wings arrow sunward
piercing sapphire; bloody light
slowly sieves to stars.
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Sonia Heidi Unruh
I love: my husband and children; all who claim me as family or friend; the first bite of chocolate; the last blue before sunset; solving puzzles; stroking cats; finding myself by writing; losing myself in reading; the Creator who is love.
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Comments (21)
Congrats on Top Story!
Oh yeah. Sonia, this is stunning! πππ
Congrats on top story!
congratulations on top story.
Congrats for the top story.
An arresting haiku! Congratulations for the richly merited TS distinction!
Very stunning work β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Breathtaking visuals. Love this Haiku! Congratulations on Top Story! π₯³
Well...it took them quite a while to make it, but congrats on Top Story, Sonia!
Lovely nature poem!!!β€οΈβ€οΈ
gorgeous work Sonia!
This is actually quite deep, wonderful perspective of light.
Descriptive and beautiful!!! Love this!!!
Perfect picture - haiku combination!
a wonderful piece, Sonja. Fantastic imagery - truly.
Oh just stunning imagery here, Sonia. Breathtaking. "seives to stars"-- I love imagining that transition, up up up.
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You packed a lot in so few words. Nicely done, Sonia!
Fantastic Haiku!
This is just gorgeous! The word choice-wow!
Love this! so much drama in so few words!