Dawn
a moment at sunrise
Photo by Irina Iriser on Unsplash
Softly, darkness lay like a blanket, holding the world as it breathed deeply.
Inside, everyone was still dreaming, not yet ready to stir before the dawn. A
Lone figure sat on a lark's perch with eyes wide, barely making a sound.
Every shade of blackness shifted before her in the transient sky until...
Night gave way to beams flooding the vast expanse in an instant.
Cautiously, the sun reached to touch her face, bringing a delicate warmth.
Echos of life signaled the start of day and the silence surrendered.
About the Creator
Bugsy Watts
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Comments (13)
Softly and silently, you fill me with hope like the first ray of sunlight that marks the end of the night for a new beginning.āļø
Gorgeous
Beautiful!
such a wonderful read!
Congratulations on your Top Story Bugsy!
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well Said.
Great work! This felt sublime!
Very well. Congratulations šš
A beautiful moment.
What a lovely tale you've woven with your acrostic poem. Well done. Congratulations on the Top Story.
A beautiful evocation of the dawn, Bugsy.
I felt this unfold so deeply and wonderfully. Really beautiful work :)