
Darkness, I really like you..
I can't sleep in the light I need you..
But the deadly secrets that you hide...
I'm not sure, but within you, I see no guide..
Darkness! I am really Like you...
All dark and alone, just one like you..
But my dear friend, I don't like it..
All the loneliness, pressure, depression there's a lot in it..
Darkness! You promised me you'll always be there..
and now it seems like I'll forever stay here..
But who am I? Why do I still feel sad when I have you..?
Tell me, my true friend! Should I leave you..?
Darkness! you are my heartbeat..
But tell me why when people meet you and me together, They complain if my heart was made of concrete..?
Hey Dark! All I see is only you..?
No light is found even when the sun shines above you..
Tell me! I really wanna stay with you..
Cause now It feels as if a true friend is you..
Darkness..... I ..... really......like......you......now.......
Darkness can't bear more I tried but let's meet again now...
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Writer: Eiman Asif
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Oooo, I love my darkness too! Your poem was so poignant!
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Awww, what a beautiful tribute to the moon! Loved it!