Disclaimer: for certain reasons, the name of the main character in this story has been changed. Therefore, you should play along, and pretend that you don't recognize who this story is about. Hush-hush, or Dambo will pay you a visit; he knows where you live.
Dambo flies no more,
Shies away no more,
Trusts no one
Anymore.
You've got a gun?
He's armed as well.
Now, say your prayer
And go to hell.
Your slow response is your betrayer.
***
Dambo grew up and learned some truths,
He is no more that naive youth.
Want to survive?
Then grow a tusk,
Or fetch a knife.
Don't let them bask
In your despair, pain, and sorrow.
So fight as if there's no tomorrow!
Between two options—fight or flight,
He chose the first one.
Hold on tight!
***
Bang! Be gone!
***
Who's now the hunter? who's the prey?
Dambo just wants to live, to stay.
This world seems to be small for you,
So there you go,
Sleep well, adieu!
Comments (7)
Effective tongue in cheek kind of way to make a really good point. Bravo. Dambo: what a well-developed and original character you have created here. ;) Dambo conquers all!
This was a fun read, and I absolutely loved the images.
Wow, this is so good. My inner child hates to see Dambo so jaded, but I love the message here, as encapsulated by the final comic, and the reality of elephants' existence. Great poem, the energy it has is fantastic, and I love your rhyming choices.
Haha! So brilliant! Love this!!
Excellent work
Andrei this was a thought provoking and intriguing read! I'm feeling a little under-cultured as I don't think I know the reference! But I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and the underlying themes! Nicely done!
Damn! That short comic made me snort laugh 🤣. Way to go Dambo!