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DAD'S BLUE EYES

Blue Haiku

By Babs IversonPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
DAD'S BLUE EYES
Photo by Yan Berthemy on Unsplash

Dad's eyes ocean blue

my son inherited the hue.

Daughter envious.

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you for reading!

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Babs Iverson

Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.

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  • Lightning Bolt ⚡9 months ago

    ⚡💙💙💙⚡

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    Nice Babs!! I have two grandsons that have blue eyes and neither of their parents have blue eyes, but there are blue eyes in some of the grandparents.💗💕

  • Jay Kantor2 years ago

    Hi Babs - From this Blue-Eyed Senior to you. I know you are ensconced within the splinter groups that this old fashion Storyteller/Schtick artist is not invited into. But, please take (3) minutes to view my "Such a Deal." If you can't relate I will offer you a refund; restocking fee exempt. I'm just so proud that after the 'Salvation Army' viewed the piece they offered me a j.o.b....FerReal..! Jbud.in.l.a.

  • Tiffany Gordon3 years ago

    Very Nice! I bet both sets are gorgeous!

  • This was lovely!

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  • Caroline Jane3 years ago

    Awwww. My son has blue eyes like his Daddy too. 🥰

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