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Cruel Death's hand

A loss to us

By Mo DarasiPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Cruel Death's hand
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It was only this morning that I saw you

Smiling and playing with us kids.

You berated us for staying up so late, we argue

But then listen to your wisely sense.

You left for work that morning hastily

And then we continued on playfully

We played until the sky began to bruise

And then got hit with the devastating news

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At first I didn’t know what to do

I simply stood there

He told us he had a lot to do

And now he’s simply not there

I was young and didn’t fully understand

The cruel thing, that is death’s hand

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I remember seeing my uncle sitting, face slumped

Clutching tissues, in his hand clumped

I’ve never known him to not be robust

But here he is, the veil is burst

Crying and weeping, he’s truly undone

For the loss was great.

The loss of his son

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Proceeded was the burial

Never known someone to be taken

Covered in thin white material

Gently lain in the ground, retaken

You were always an icon, ever wise

I hope to see you in paradise

sad poetry

About the Creator

Mo Darasi

I write fiction, poetry and occasional articles about interesting topics.

Finding interesting ways to write a poem or hide messages within them seems to be my main interesting in writing now, and it's been fun

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  • Test3 years ago

    I already hearted this, but forgot to comment. Wow, that’s cruel indeed… to have someone go suddenly, when you’re not expecting it. Thank you for sharing this with me. I know it could not have been easy to revisit and write, but I hope it helped give you closure.

  • Kristen Balyeat3 years ago

    Such a powerful yet heartbreaking piece, Mohammed! Beautifully expressed.

  • Roy Stevens3 years ago

    Very powerful Mohammed! Is it autobiographical? If so, my profound condolences!

  • Donna Renee3 years ago

    This is so sad! Beautifully written ❤️

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