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Can I Touch?

A short poem for the "Sensational" challenge

By Mo DarasiPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
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Remember the days when you were younger?

Hand to toy, always a muncher

Never look, ask, or consider your position

Never take notice for opposition

Playing together forbidden, no permission

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Playing together is the recommendation, otherwise,

You’re missing out on great fun, It’s never wise

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Get back to playing, sorry for the harassment

Contemplate what i said, no embarrassment.

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About the Creator

Mo Darasi

I write fiction, poetry and occasional articles about interesting topics.

Finding interesting ways to write a poem or hide messages within them seems to be my main interesting in writing now, and it's been fun

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  • Dana Stewart3 years ago

    Subtle and memorable.

  • Roy Stevens3 years ago

    That was really well-done Mohammed. You offered up a powerful message in a very concise package. Clever!

  • Kristen Balyeat3 years ago

    Good one! I loved the underlying message here, Mohammed!

  • Donna Renee3 years ago

    Oooooh hidden message! 😁

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