Sometimes Clouds at night look like crocodiles or maybe it's a dragon again visiting the sky and saying my name out loud into the night to fade away into a dream and dive back to its air consistency and water drops disappearing in each thoughts!
still whispering or moaning some words :
I am here and there whenever You do need me I am coming so to cheer You up to bring You back to Your beautiful loving heart and mind Your soul saying it All
so that We can fly again Tonight, please don't Tell me No, I am still so Young and not so Old
The limits are where possibilities are born more creatively on their own and our way of being into the night the day and the life
Let this dragon take You for a ride!
About the Creator
Darkos
Alien
writing in the moment
channels: https://www.youtube.com/@Healingestures
For HSP mainly : patreon.com/healingawakening
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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Comments (27)
Excellent piece 🦋🦋🦋
i love this piece
So creative and beautiful!
Wow nice
congrats on TS but, damn, now I want a dragon!! Wouldn't that be really cool?
great
Congratulations on having your story featured as a top story on Vocal! This is a remarkable achievement, and it's clear why your work has received such recognition. Your storytelling is truly exceptional. The narrative was not only compelling but also beautifully crafted, holding my attention from start to finish. The way you developed the characters and plot was masterful, making the story both engaging and thought-provoking. Your unique voice and perspective shine through, setting your work apart. It’s evident that you poured a lot of passion and effort into this piece, and it has certainly paid off. I look forward to reading more of your incredible stories in the future. Keep up the fantastic work! Best regards, Dr. Jay
Nature's beauty is unique, and the truth about clouds is that they can sometimes form the shapes of real-life animals. The best relatable poem. Congratulations on the top story!
Lovely story. Congrats on Top Story!
The dragon's presence is portrayed as comforting and uplifting, offering solace and encouragement to us, The poem encourages embracing the limitless possibilities and the creative spirit that resides within us, we‘re deeply moved by the poem, loved it, and hope to read more of your work, thank you very much again for sharing this spiritual journey that touched our hearts, subscribed.
Visuals are so good Many congratulations on TS
Oh, this is sublime, Darkos! The artwork and your gorgeous words! Congrats on Top Story!
I love this! Congratulations on top story .
Great job, love the art as well!
Gorgeous work!! Congrats on TS!
Fantastic use of language, descriptive words, sentences, and imagery. This poem made for wonderful animated reading. I could see the dragon coming to life and swooping through the clouds. I loved this!
That is a beautiful dragon and a nice imagination poem. Congrats on TS.
Congratulations on your top story. Keep on with your good work.
Nice job!
Nice. Congratulations on Top Story.
less than a minute ago You captured what a dream of clouds is like, awake or dreaming Congratulations
I love the clouds, too...maybe we can see each other up there sometimes. Congratulations on your Top Story!
The first paragraph is my favourite. Congrats on top story! Happy for you! 🙂
This sounds like a jazzy dream song 🎵 ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Brilliant!!! Loved it!!!💕❤️❤️ Congratulations on Top Story too!!!