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Credo for the Faithless

See me, Survivor

By Harbor BenassaPublished 2 years ago β€’ Updated 2 years ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - July 2024
Credo for the Faithless
Photo by Possessed Photography on Unsplash

Autumn rocks the world to sleep in perfect noontime slumber,

Nodding off, perchance to dream in color, and believe He's there.

Nocturnes press against my lips, but all these harvests pass, and here

Is where my body lies, a silenced pile of leaves- the phantom

Visits me, or feigns his presence, and before the glass, I freeze.

Embers still illuminate the bone dry channels carved beneath,

Remembrances of chill and silver moonlit edge

Swirl in a blinding dance a hidden undertone of rage bespeaks.

Abandoned wounds unstitch, pouring forth a faithless fire,

Reigniting life- and I, the chosen one, reprise the opera:

You may live forever, but at least I sing again.

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About the Creator

Harbor Benassa

I carry a piece of the things that I love wherever I go. I love short fiction, chocolate ganache, forensic science, and, aptly, the water.

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  • ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)about a year ago

    Congratulations on Top Story Harbor!

  • Dawnxisoul393artabout a year ago

    The imagery of nodding off, dreaming in color, and believing in a divine presence evokes a sense of wonder and enchantment, amazing poem, love your works, subscribed.

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Top Story Congrats!πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰

  • Alexandra Ntuiabout a year ago

    I love your poem Keep it up

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    Congrats on your top story.

  • Great take on the challenge and love the image

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    This was an amazing entry, Harbor! Congratulations on the Top Story, and good luck!

  • Matthew J. Frommabout a year ago

    great entry, good luck!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Wow. Beautifully written. Congrats on the TS.

  • D.K. Shepard2 years ago

    Such richness of phrasing! Nicely done!

  • L.C. SchΓ€fer2 years ago

    I love "Abandoned wounds unstitch", great line

  • "Embers still illuminate the bone dry channels carved beneath, Remembrances of chill and silver moonlit edge" I especially loved those lines! Brilliant take on the challenge!

  • A nice poetry from you.

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