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Costly Free Will

An Acrostic Alexandrine

By Patrick M. OhanaPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Photo by CLARA METIVIER BEUKES on Unsplash

Car accident when I was ten or eleven

Ordered to remain indoors to avoid all cars

Sensing that something is surely wrong with heaven

Thanking instead all the remaining lucky stars

Left or right or step back or straight ahead for thee

Yesterday may be lost but its actions proceed

Free will surely exists although it is not free

Realisation takes time for one to accede

Every consciousness wants this notion to persist

Entering within looking out to disagree

Where is the so-called truth if it does not exist

I read-heard that it may be an illusion’s plea

Lilliputian leaps towards an infinity

Lopsided given its supposed divinity

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Dedicated to irony and Goddess Athena.

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About the Creator

Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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  • Latasha karenabout a year ago

    Amazing

  • Alyssa wilkshoreabout a year ago

    Interesting

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