Cosmic Whispers
Pulses Through the Void
Alone, but unbroken.
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Lone star glistens
Beams covered in darkened skies
Light that shines, unseen.
🌌
Signals pierce the void
Fingers stretch, but none respond
Rhythms drift alone.
🌠
Light shines through the void
Beams stretch long, but none answer.
Rhythms pulse, unheard.
🌟
Star twinkles gently
Messages lost in quiet time
The Earth turns away.
🌙
Alone, it still shines
Its light breaks through endless dark
It glows, though unseen.
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Original Haiku Chain by Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin. AI tags are coincidental.
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Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.
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This poem really speaks to the soul, amazing work.
Your words shine like a twinkling celestial body
This poem is like a visit beyond the Earth's rotation. I like the reverence you showed to the stars, and that you acknowledge their unseen lights. Your interaction with the stars using a finger was breathtaking. It stretches the mind to reach above for inspiration. You're very creative.
Oh wow, that was so deep and beautiful. Loved your poem!