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Cosmic indifference IX

A haiku with continuity

By Sam SpinelliPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Cosmic indifference IX
Photo by Emmanuel Appiah on Unsplash

Now my vision dims

The cosmos swirl indifferent

I can wait no more

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Authors note: I hope this works as a stand alone. It’s also part of a themed series. If you’re interested in continuity, you can start at the beginning,

or here’s the next one:

Haiku

About the Creator

Sam Spinelli

Trying to make human art the best I can, never Ai!

Help me write better! Critical feedback is welcome :)

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  • Testabout a year ago

    such a great writer

  • This felt like a mental breakdown or downward spiral. I'm so sorry if my interpretations are always way off 😅😅

  • Joe Pattersonabout a year ago

    Catchy.

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