coming to the surface
haiku

Photo by Medena Rosa on Unsplash
coy lurk from the scarp
sapphire petals yearn to be
seen from all angles
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11 Dec. 2022
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About the Creator
Moon Desert
UK-based
BA in Cultural Studies
Crime Fiction: Love
Poetry: Friend
Psychology: Salvation
Where the wild roses grow full of words...
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters




Comments (7)
Delightfully delicate poem.👍🏼
Beautiful Imagery! I enjoyed reading this a few times. :)
I love the vividness of your imagery. The personification works beautifully to bring the scene to life for a reader. Congrats, Mescaline!
congrats - good job
Congratulations and well done. Love the haiku
This is beautiful congratulations
I love this!