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By Moon DesertPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in Blue Haiku Challenge
Photo by Medena Rosa on Unsplash

coy lurk from the scarp

sapphire petals yearn to be

seen from all angles

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11 Dec. 2022

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About the Creator

Moon Desert

UK-based

BA in Cultural Studies

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Crime Fiction: Love

Poetry: Friend

Psychology: Salvation

Where the wild roses grow full of words...

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶11 months ago

    Delightfully delicate poem.👍🏼

  • Allie Bickerton3 years ago

    Beautiful Imagery! I enjoyed reading this a few times. :)

  • Alison McBain3 years ago

    I love the vividness of your imagery. The personification works beautifully to bring the scene to life for a reader. Congrats, Mescaline!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    congrats - good job

  • Congratulations and well done. Love the haiku

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    This is beautiful congratulations

  • Marilyn Glover3 years ago

    I love this!

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