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Come Grow Old With Me

A Love Story

By Mother CombsPublished 3 years ago Updated 7 months ago 1 min read
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Come grow old with me

Come view our love

as it ages like wine

As one we sail through this life

Come grow old with me

Hold my hand as I lead you

Through the maze of love

And we trek the halls of fate

Come grow old with me

sit by my side as we ride

down this road of life

We'll take a romp through love

As we kiss under the oak tree

Come grow old with me

As we rock side by side

In our seats on the sun deck

As we curl up face to face

Come grow old with me

love poemslistfact or fictionFamilyFree VerseStream of ConsciousnessFriendship

About the Creator

Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    It's always so nice to see people still in love after many years!

  • Sweet piece💖📝

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