Cold Thoughts While Our Plane
is finally pushed back from the gate
I watched light sluice the whalebone ceiling
of the Boeing 737
as shards of ice slice through freezing rivers,
colder than the air temperature projected for our flight
at 30,000 feet above sea level (-48 degrees Fahrenheit).
Which, now that I mention it,
is also much colder than the water
that embraces the glass tunnel in an aquarium
(6 ½ inch thick Plexiglas),
still a rather thin barrier
between the shark and my upturned gaze
that peers nauseously into triplicate rows
of boomerang grins.
I am grateful no sharks float above my five foot ceiling
just the freeze dried jet stream,
warded off by the miraculous 1/16 inch aluminum casing
of this commercial airliner,
and triplicate rows of fluorescent bulbs
that hesitantly suggest
"fasten seat belts while seated"
which I'm not completely sure
holds the same level of command
over the people within this thin aluminum tube
in which I will soon be flying.
Or the grasping hands of the jet stream
(average of 110 miles per hour)
with whom my fate would quickly rest
should Newton's Third Law choose to exert it's will
over this glorious invention of humanity
which was built to defy the will of gravity
for the Wright brothers amusement
and our modern convenience.
About the Creator
Brooke Farrar
Inspired by Lemony Snicket, who kindled a flame in my childish mind, and I am constantly in awe of Douglas Adams' ability to gather seemingly ordinary words into a confusing bouquet of inspiration and hilarity.
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I felt you captured this imagery really well. I had a few favorite lines but I'm going to narrow it down to these two: 1. "I watched light sluice the whalebone ceiling of the Boeing 737 as shards of ice slice through freezing rivers," 2. "Or the grasping hands of the jet stream (average of 110 miles per hour) with whom my fate would quickly rest should Newton's Third Law choose to exert it's will"