Cold Shoes
Poem about leaving a trace
The citizens of the north wind
Don't look upon each other as neighbours.
Birds, I mean. They wear their fences:
Feathers the colour of oil or soap.
They dwell, like glaciers and sour air,
And winter is so glossy the eye
Slides even as it spreads the earth.
Speaking plainly of things
Buried for all to see.
~.~
A murmuration of mountains.
With enough sky around you,
All the speed in the world
Makes nothing move.
Ink is a stain, intentional spilling. Not your
Way, I suppose.
Yet there are things to be said,
Whether I say them or not.
I ask you, pursue
~.~
Why does snow speak to me?
At the first you grab,
And you’re quick to make of it what you will
It takes shape without hardening
Slips, caresses, a velvet
That passes the hand by.
I’m not even sure which
Is the snowman, all parts speaking for themselves
Quickness, quickness, quickness
~.~
Curious, how every path is faster when you’ve been before
But this isn’t a conversation, since
That needs a trade.
A powerful one, deep skills.
Words are helpful, but sometimes...
Now, let’s not get
Distracted by the sweat we feel later.
After all,
It’s not the snow that put it there
~.~
Not the wind,
Sticks nor stones
Try not to ask too hard, or you’ll have Spring.
On that edge, you can dip through bone like cream
Make a visor so the land can speak
Fluent with daylight and disruptive colouration.
There is gratitude, I know, in your merciless love.
And so I honour you.
With feet that leave friction behind.
About the Creator
Matthew Daniels
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This was excellent work! Do write more poetry, sir!
nothing rhymes, is this a poem.