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Cold Quiet Dip Before Sleep

Her way of getting calm

By George’s Girl 2026 Published about 7 hours ago Updated about 7 hours ago 1 min read
By Marie381Uk 2026

Cold Quiet Dip Before Sleep

Ice waits in the white bath, still as a held breath,

A woman lowers herself slowly, testing the silence of water.

Small crystals drift and knock together, like quiet bells in a cold chapel,

The room blue with evening, the air calm and patient.

Her shoulders sink beneath the frozen surface,

A sharp breath rises, then settles into control.

The body trembles first, then listens, then yields,

Finding a strange peace in the discipline of cold.

Each cube melts with a tiny surrender,

Each second loosens the weight of the day.

Thoughts that shouted an hour ago grow distant,

Now they float like soft fragments on still water.

She closes her eyes and counts the slow minutes,

Feeling her pulse steady beneath the cold pressure.

Pain becomes clarity, clarity becomes rest,

And the restless mind begins to quiet its storms.

Soon she will leave the bath, dry her skin, dim the lights.

Soon the bed will call her into deeper calm.

But for this moment she sits with the cold, #coldasice #freezing #frozen

A silent ritual before sleep arrives.

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George’s Girl 2026

I've been writing poetry since the age of 10. With pen in hand, I wander the realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture you ❤️#Marie381UkWrites

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  • Miss Beyabout 6 hours ago

    Lovely poem!♥️🌻

  • Angelina_Alexabout 6 hours ago

    Hey, I recently found your story and I really enjoyed reading it. The way you write makes the scenes easy to imagine, almost like watching them unfold visually. Because of that, I feel like your story would translate really well into a webtoon or comic format. I’m a commissioned comic artist, and I’d love the chance to create visual scenes based on your story if you’d ever be interested in that. No pressure at all, I just thought it could be a fun and creative collaboration. If you'd like to talk more about it sometime, you can reach me on Discord (lunapuresoul) or Instagram (lunaartsoul). Best regards, Luna

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