Codependent Clauses
Subordinates at Work

From here to there, the subject and verb
Seek to complete an action in thought
Of object, direct, or nothing disturbed
The commas will rule when festooning what's wrought
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Subject and verb inserted between same
Add detail to the sense of the story so told
Even an appositive, set off as a name
Can add to the facts that more precisely unfold
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Adjectives and adverbs, forgoing conjunctions
Anchored by mere commas or dashes—called Em
Will cite how, when, why, and even dysfunction
To modify the facts when applied to them
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The clauses between words hold backstories unheard
If you miss all the slanted lines underneath
In the sentence diagrammed in schemata of words
And miss life between sharp s'words otherwise sheathed
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The road to the period can be stark and uncluttered
Losing all music and melody of diction
Clauses punctuate the sensibilities uttered
And can oil a change to agreement from friction
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Even brackets can embrace independently
An afterthought, alluding a parenthetical aside
Even ellipses can replace co-dependently
A colorful metaphor insidiously astride
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Do not eschew the ornate and pedantic
Plant those sentiments between the words with pauses
Be, say I, unashamed of semantics
It's AI, so blamed, if it comes without clauses
About the Creator
Gerard DiLeo
Retired, not tired. Hippocampus, behave!
Make me rich! https://www.amazon.com/Gerard-DiLeo/e/B00JE6LL2W/
My substrack at https://substack.com/@drdileo





Comments (9)
Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
This is masterful, sir!
Well done
My favorite Class was English. I really liked sentence diagramming. It was fun and the longer the sentence the intricate it got. It was like geometric art. Good job.
Witty, rhythmic, and grammatically glorious! You’ve managed to turn clauses and punctuation into poetic characters with voice and charm. A delightful ode to the unsung heroes of syntax—thank you for making grammar feel like art. ✍️✨
Fabulous! Congrats on TS!
That final line is gobsmackingly brilliant Gerard. Loved how playful you employ sentence diagraming to come up with your own Turing Test! I loved it!
love this, lol
A characteristically clever meditation upon the grammar and syntax that so many neglect!