
I danced away in my dreams
Nobody was in my arms but I still danced
Eyes closed, I glided across the dance floor
Letting the wind guide my steps
As I had found solace in it’s hollowness
A hollowness that echoed back the emptiness of my existence
And as the drums of loneliness drowned out the space beside me, I screamed and hollered
Willing the universe to echo back my pain
But in the end I was alone
I danced away in my reveries
Nobody was in my arms but I still danced
The world was calm as the emptiness in my soul guided me across the dance floor
Five, six, seven, eight, my spirit spirited away
One wrong step and my mind exploded
My confidence quickly faded into apprehension
And as I rushed off the stage, I relived a struggle well tucked away in my essence
All those eyes that have haunted my existence resurfaced to punish me with their disdain
So I retreated to my cocoon like the coward I am
To safely hang in my wall of loneliness
Because in the end, I was alone
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Literalcate
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Comments (10)
Wistfully beautiful
"Nobody was in my arms but I still danced " WOW love that line
Congratulations on your top story
I loved the rhythm, the flow, and the depth of this poem!
Beautiful, you’re a natural story teller.
This really makes me think of Pearl, I love that movie and I really enjoyed your poem!
Congrats on top story! amzing story, 1 word "Subscribed".
I probably don’t need to tell you this - but this is beautiful work. Perfect flow, stunning imagery, and it definitely hits the mark with evocation, even though I feel like the exact details as to why are still on the tip of my tongue (which I love about this!). Congrats on a well deserved top story 👏
What a hauntingly lovely poem and one with which I could so easily identify. Congratulations on the Top Story - it's well-earned.
This was so beautiful. As an introvert and a self-proclaimed loner, I could relate to a lot of this. Lovely writing.