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By LiteralcatePublished about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - September 2024
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I danced away in my dreams

Nobody was in my arms but I still danced

Eyes closed, I glided across the dance floor

Letting the wind guide my steps

As I had found solace in it’s hollowness

A hollowness that echoed back the emptiness of my existence

And as the drums of loneliness drowned out the space beside me, I screamed and hollered

Willing the universe to echo back my pain

But in the end I was alone

I danced away in my reveries

Nobody was in my arms but I still danced

The world was calm as the emptiness in my soul guided me across the dance floor

Five, six, seven, eight, my spirit spirited away

One wrong step and my mind exploded

My confidence quickly faded into apprehension

And as I rushed off the stage, I relived a struggle well tucked away in my essence

All those eyes that have haunted my existence resurfaced to punish me with their disdain

So I retreated to my cocoon like the coward I am

To safely hang in my wall of loneliness

Because in the end, I was alone

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Literalcate

Seeking to be remembered among the poets and the creators of the world.

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  • Testabout a year ago

    Wistfully beautiful

  • FallingRainabout a year ago

    "Nobody was in my arms but I still danced " WOW love that line

  • Linda Goodmanabout a year ago

    Congratulations on your top story

  • Shirley Belkabout a year ago

    I loved the rhythm, the flow, and the depth of this poem!

  • Caitlin Charltonabout a year ago

    Beautiful, you’re a natural story teller.

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    This really makes me think of Pearl, I love that movie and I really enjoyed your poem!

  • Jason “Jay” Benskinabout a year ago

    Congrats on top story! amzing story, 1 word "Subscribed".

  • J. R. Loweabout a year ago

    I probably don’t need to tell you this - but this is beautiful work. Perfect flow, stunning imagery, and it definitely hits the mark with evocation, even though I feel like the exact details as to why are still on the tip of my tongue (which I love about this!). Congrats on a well deserved top story 👏

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    What a hauntingly lovely poem and one with which I could so easily identify. Congratulations on the Top Story - it's well-earned.

  • Manisha Dhalaniabout a year ago

    This was so beautiful. As an introvert and a self-proclaimed loner, I could relate to a lot of this. Lovely writing.

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