In gilded cloudscape
Far gulls wheel gently about;
Freedom incarnate
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Gabriel Huizenga
Twas for love of words that I first joined this site:
Poetry, especially, and dear short stories too;
For to live one's best is to read, and to write!
So find me in words here, and I'll find you 💙
Thanks for stopping by! :)
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A Dart at Dusk
Seconds ago, the sullen sun set on the two of us… my exuberant furry companion and me. A fresh breeze embraces us, delivering welcome relief from the day’s oppressive heat. His typical stumbling and staggering along — apace with a sloth — has turned into trip-trapping, high-stepping, almost skipping along.
By Angie the Archivist 📚🪶about 22 hours ago in Petlife
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I'd love to be a gull, just for a day! Beautiful writing!
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You always manage to craft a vivid picture Gabriel! Love the idea of birds drifting too😊
well done
There are few things that I envy more than the freedom to ride on the back of the wind. Wonderful Haiku, Gabriel. I want to soar with your gulls!
Gorgeous! Beautiful imagery with a powerful close! Well done, Gabriel!
Gosh this was so stunning. Loved your Haiku!
Beautiful ✅… I second Rommial’s comment 😊.
Well-wrought! I'm a great lover of birds. "Freedom incarnate" does justice to the marvel of their flight.
Lovely image
Freedom, indeed. Well done.